语法学习最终要服务表达。写作时可从简单句开始,再逐步增加结构。
25.1 从简单句开始
English is important.
I study English every day.
Reading helps me learn new words.
25.2 用并列句表达并列或转折
English is difficult, but I enjoy learning it.
英语很难,但我喜欢学。
25.3 用从句表达复杂逻辑
原因:
I study English because I want to communicate with more people.
条件:
If I practice every day, I will make progress.
定语:
I like books that teach me useful skills.
名词性从句:
I believe that practice is the key to language learning.
25.4 用非谓语让句子更简洁
普通表达:
I read English articles every day because I want to improve my vocabulary.
更简洁:
I read English articles every day to improve my vocabulary.
普通表达:
When I listen to English podcasts, I write down useful expressions.
更紧凑:
Listening to English podcasts, I write down useful expressions.
注意:分词结构的逻辑主语要和主句主语一致。
错误:
Walking down the street, a car hit me.
这句话字面上像是“车走在街上时撞了我”。应改为:
Walking down the street, I was hit by a car.
或更自然:
As I was walking down the street, a car hit me.
25.5 写作自查清单
写完一段英文后,检查:
- 每个句子有没有谓语动词?
- 主语和谓语是否一致?
- 时态是否符合时间?
- 名词单复数是否正确?
- 冠词是否遗漏或误用?
- 介词搭配是否自然?
- 从句是否使用陈述语序?
- 代词指代是否清晰?
- 句子之间是否有逻辑连接?
- 是否有中文直译痕迹?